내용은 전반적으로 충실하고 논리적이나 어법과 문법에서 다소 오류가 보입니다. 더 자연스러운 표현과 문장 완성도를 위해 다듬는 것이 필요합니다.
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평가일 2026-07-30 16:37:25
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내용
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문법
18 / 30
표현
17 / 20
어휘
10 / 10
구성
10 / 10
🖼 첨부 사진
📄 OCR로 읽은 학생 답안
Linguists call these filled pauses, which are a kind of hesitation phenomenon. And these seemingly insignificant interruptions are actually quite meaningful in spoken communication. For example, while a silent pause might be interpreted as a sign for others to start speaking, a filled pause can signal that you're not finished yet. Hesitation phenomena can buy time for you speech to catch up with your thoughts, or to fish out the right word for a situation. And they don't just benefit the speaker - a filled pause lets your listeners know an important word is on the way. Linguists have even found that people are more likely to remember a word if it comes after a hesitation. -Lorenzo Garcia-Amaya. Why do we, like, hesitation when we, um, speak?
✅ 잘한 점
주제에 대한 이해와 설명이 명확하다여러 예시를 통해 주장을 잘 뒷받침했다구성 흐름이 자연스럽고 문단이 잘 연결되었다
🔥 우선 수정할 표현
'you speech' -> 'your speech' 수정 필요단어 표기 오류 (buy -> buy time → borrow time 또는 take time)문장 끝 표현 'Why do we, like, hesitation...' 문법 개선
🧩 문장별 첨삭
학생 문장
Hesitation phenomena can buy time for you speech to catch up with you thoughts, or to fish out the right word for a situation.
추천 문장
Hesitation phenomena can buy time for your speech to catch up with your thoughts, or to fish out the right word for a situation.
이유
소유격 your가 you로 잘못 쓰임
학생 문장
Hesitation phenomena can buy time for you speech to catch up with you thoughts, or to fish out the right word for a situation.
추천 문장
Hesitation phenomena can buy time for your speech to catch up with your thoughts, or to find the right word for a situation.
이유
'fish out'보다 'find'가 더 자연스럽고 일반적인 표현
학생 문장
Why do we, like, hesitation when we, um, speak?
추천 문장
Why do we hesitate when we, um, speak?
이유
'hesitation'은 명사, 여기서는 동사 'hesitate'의 활용이 필요
📘 전체 수정본
Linguists call these filled pauses a kind of hesitation phenomenon. These seemingly insignificant interruptions are actually quite meaningful in spoken communication. For example, while a silent pause might be interpreted as a sign for others to start speaking, a filled pause can signal that you are not finished yet. Hesitation phenomena can buy time for your speech to catch up with your thoughts or to find the right word for a situation. They don't just benefit the speaker; a filled pause lets listeners know that an important word is on the way. Linguists have even found that people are more likely to remember a word if it comes after a hesitation. Why do we hesitate when we, um, speak?
📝 오늘 꼭 외울 표현
• a kind of hesitation phenomenon
• filled pauses
• buy time to catch up with thoughts
• signal that you're not finished yet
• more likely to remember a word
👩 튜터 코멘트
내용 구성이 좋고 주제에 대한 이해도가 높아 잘 썼어요. 다만, 소유격 오류와 어색한 표현들이 조금 있어요. 특히 'you speech' 대신 'your speech'로 고치고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 다듬어 보세요. 마지막 질문 문장은 동사를 올바르게 사용해 표현하는 연습을 하면 좋겠습니다. 다음 글에서는 문법에 더 신경 써서 더 깔끔한 문장을 만들어 봅시다.